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« Reply #1 on: September 05, 2009, 08:43:25 AM » |
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 "sad han"? being frozen in carbonite is a drag... |
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« Reply #2 on: September 05, 2009, 08:44:59 AM » |
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Ain't it though LOL
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Film photography and the Soviet Union are not dead. Just downsized.
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« Reply #3 on: September 05, 2009, 12:45:08 PM » |
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Too dark. Detail are blocked up. It would really snap if it had some side light to get those little highlights and shadows. It looks either over exposed or over developed. If you follow my way of doing things it would probably be both, just to make sure.  |
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« Reply #4 on: September 13, 2009, 03:24:09 PM » |
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Thanks Glenn I am working on that I was pushing that Varicath I in HC developer... I think I can do better so hang in there I will get better. Oh and For some reason I recently found 2 bags of D-11 developer so Pete will be getting one and who knows what the heck we can come up with.
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« Reply #5 on: September 13, 2009, 05:30:48 PM » |
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Och Larry, rat hond dussnae look sad tae mee, but it certainly seems tae bee honest ;-)
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« Reply #6 on: September 13, 2009, 05:32:20 PM » |
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Thank you Ed and I missed you where the heck have ye been?
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« Reply #7 on: September 13, 2009, 05:35:09 PM » |
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Larry, I like it but I also agree with Glenn that some more detail could be shown. There's so much texture evident in this sculpture, but it's lost in the darkness.
I am looking forward to trying out the D-11, also the Acufine when it arrives, hopefully tomorrow.
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Pete (Corpus Christi, TX) Every professional should remain always in his heart an amateur. - Alfred Eisenstaedt (1898-1995) My Website
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« Reply #8 on: September 13, 2009, 05:37:08 PM » |
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Och Larry, av nae bin too weell, but am Ok noo :-) It's nice tae bee missed  |
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« Reply #9 on: September 13, 2009, 05:39:00 PM » |
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Glad you are better my friend I hate when any of me friends is not doing well.
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« Reply #10 on: March 12, 2010, 08:28:59 AM » |
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Sorry to come in so late, Larry.
If you're still mulling about this one, I think the white background contradicts the "sad" part of the message you're trying to convey. My mind sees a dreamy/aloft/light message instead.
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« Reply #11 on: March 12, 2010, 12:21:49 PM » |
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Thanks Shadowfox.
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« Reply #12 on: March 12, 2010, 06:00:20 PM » |
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Larry, just my 2c. I find it very hard to make an interesting picture with a white background and dark subject, unless the subject is very compelling, for instance a human face portrait.
If you must do it, then make sure your subject stands out, your composition lines are tight and no distractions arise. Any white area making a shape will take the attention away.
In this case I'd suggest cropping out the left-upper area and a bit of the right side, to eliminate the white triangle at the top and the white space to the right of the knee. Ideally, I'd go for even more selective focus to completely blur anything but that very interesting hand, with the texture that makes this picture.
You might even try processing this picture into a negative in PS or equivalent, and see what comes out.
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« Reply #13 on: March 13, 2010, 04:09:48 AM » |
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Thanks I though have moved on and am now in my long night phase.  |
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